a lone
Joe's Galaxy |
Dramatic words work well, you could try:
lightening
thunder
slime
bang
explosion
crash
burn
dripping
Joe's thin & fat |
or descriptive words
short & tall
little & big
twice
upside down
under & over
uphill & downhill
squeezed
squashed
leaning....
Joe's uphill downhill |
You can find other examples in books and on the internet, such as Alec Finlay's Loop poem, and Salt Publishing's splendidly obvious Salt, with letters pressed into the white stuff. This is also chosen by us for another reason (see below).
Alec Finlay, Loop, vinyl on wall, 2006 |
Salt Publishing logo |
A book for inspiration is A Poke in the I, a recent collection of concrete poems, selected by Paul Janeczko and niftily illustrated by Chris Raschka. If you'd like to dig deeper, look at Concrete Poetry by Mary Ellen Solt, her joyous FLOWERS IN CONCRETE is at http://www.ubu.com/historical/solt/solt_flowers.html
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